The Hidden Lines



The Hidden Lines


I would memorize the contours of your face

That sideways glance, that hint of smile,

The iridescent glimmer in your eyes,

How I wished that you could be mine..


I watch, and I watch, and watch, bedazzled

By the sparks of your very being,

I’m trying to frame you, in my mind,

It’s almost akin to hoarding,


And I cannot tear my gaze away,

I keep coming back for more, and more,

There is something you’ve taken from me, and

I seek to replace it with you, at my core.


And so I’ll write you in my every line,

How I wish, I wish that you were mine..






For  a very , very, very special person.. my last poem of NaPoWriMo.




Cookie ❤


8 thoughts on “The Hidden Lines

  1. Poetkatie says:

    Simply beautiful


  2. Sand says:

    Ah, I’ve been there, caught by that magnet. It’s exciting and scary and breathtaking and electrifying and you never, never want to leave it. Lovely, lovely write.


  3. Rohan 7 Things says:

    Aww, really beautiful 🙂 and big congrats on completing NaPoWriMo, well done!

    You should totally format your poems into an ebook, even just for yourself 🙂

    I’ve enjoyed following your poems this month, hope you’ll still write the odd one here and there!

    All the best Cookie 😉



    • Thank you so much, Rohan! =) I know, hopefully some day a little book will happen. Till then I’ll just keep writing and writing, and we’ll get there. =P

      Thanks so much for reading all the way through the month! I really appreciate it!



  4. Madsies says:

    Lovely. ❤
    This is Sweeet! 🙂


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