Duet Duel!

Me and Jaeger over at ohellino.wordpress.com are having a duet duel! For this, we post on each other’s blogs till a winner is decided! I’m about to send him my first repartee, but before I do that, here is Jaeger’s opener!

 

 

I soft bellow sweet

In sunset so yellow teeth

Gone spent by

Like doubt

Running motifs dry

I soft bellow sweet

And open my rib cage

In a lot all neat

As alone as poem

I remove my heart

To go at the world smitten

With cool art

As telling or show it

A tiny poem written

By a timid poet

And I soft bellow sweet

A told response rest

To pass a good test

And work at living

Before my unwanted death

 

(c)ohellino

 

 

Be sure to check in for my response! The midweek madness begins! 😀

 

 

 

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2 thoughts on “Duet Duel!

  1. […] (ohellino/Jaeger) and “Cookie Monstah” Calliope S. Lyre over at purpleperceptions are having a duet duel! For this, we post on each other’s blogs till a winner is decided! I am […]

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  2. Madsies says:

    Why try, though, so hard
    For desperate illusions of depth
    When there isn’t a six foot
    deep thought tonight
    In my head

    Like

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