Duet Duel: Line Two

Here’s what Jaeger at ohellino.wordpress.com had to say in response…. and here’s mine!



Line Two

Borne of mutual appreciation
Is a very nice thing

(Yes, yes, very nice indeed)

But you’re looking to rub my face in dung

(take heed, take heed)

I bolt up the rungs
Like a bottom feeder unsung
I thrive on the dregs of poetic charity

(oh, well said!)

And the effervescence crows
In triumphant, bubbly rows
I’ve rendered your barrel all soapy

Have fun putting me over that
Can’t keep a good girl down, and
Can’t keep us nuts bolted down like that


(c) CM
15. 09. 2016


Dum diddly um pum pum dum diddly um- lightning round!






One thought on “Duet Duel: Line Two

  1. Madsies says:

    Can’t help but smile! Very smart. 🙂


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