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I should have kept this love inside
There it could have suffocated
Silently
Without any of this
Protest
Silently, it could have suffocated
There it could have writhed
And died
I should have kept
this love
inside
Since yours has
already died
I’m empty, full of broken pride
I should have kept
this love
inside
© CM
27.09.2014
That’s flawless.. in thoughts and in scribbles.
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Thank you. I’m a little OCD about not repeating myself in poems, so this was confusing when I was done. 😛
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The case is not different for me but I take the chances when the outcome is better than before. 🙂
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this sounds like perfect song lyrics, especially because of the repetition
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Thank you, ZakiShafi. 🙂 welcome to calliope’s lyre. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Travel and commented:
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Wonderful poem
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Thank you so much! Your comment is more than words to me! 🙂
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They say, “Don’t wait to tell someone you love them before it’s too late.”
You have a great concept here but doesn’t the process kill? A perfect double edged sword.
Hugs Cookie. 🙂
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And peekaboo to that lovely photograph. Ever so pretty! ❤
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