Bimble Bumble Bum Bum


Bimble Bumble Bum Bum

A camel with a purple hump
Came over to show me his rump
He aah-ed and he ooh-ed
It hurt when he pooed
It seems that his bum had gone numb

I said, “Well what can I do?
Your bum’s in the dumps, ’tis true
Never have I seen
A camel so green
Or as purpley humped, as you!”

The camel, he huffed and he signed
Said, “Oh Doctor, never mind
I thought you’d prescribe
For me to imbibe
A bug or a drug or some kind”

I poked at his hump and I thought
He shouldn’t be left so distraught
I gave him some pills
To give his bum chills
And then numb or bummed he was not!

Yay! 😛

© CM

Day 22!! Today’s prompt was to write a poem for children, in the style of Edward Lear. And how can I be nonsensical without green camels with purple humps?


Cookie ❤


22 thoughts on “Bimble Bumble Bum Bum

  1. daslater2013 says:

    Sweetly done Cookie ❤ xdx


  2. andy1076 says:

    rofl!! someone’s in a playful mood ;D


  3. Poetkatie says:

    Lol a funny poem, my son would love this. Il have to read it to him x


  4. Serena Malcolm says:

    This made me laugh. So well done!


  5. PookyH says:

    Fabulous! Any poem with bums in it is a winner in my kids’ book!


  6. Mike says:

    You’re a tonic! Nicely done.


  7. wbdeejay says:

    Dr.Doolittle would be proud of you!


  8. Poetkatie says:

    My Son Jake, age 10 said its funny and awesome! x


  9. beckarooney says:

    Brilliant humorous, nonsense verse, loved it! You could do a series of these for a children’s book of poetry easily. Awesome! 😀 x


  10. Madsies says:

    Witty humor. Lol! Love it! ❤


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